Midgard-Survivors

Reyna · Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 9:26 pm Post subject: Poems and such

Sometimes I get the weird urge to write a.. if I should have to name it, a poem.

that's why I started this topic for my weird and stupid poems /ok feel free to laugh at them coz most of the time I don't even know where they are about XDD

Unseen Stars

As I look out the window, the unseen stars wil rise.
Right next to the dreams that were created with pride.
Secrets which have been whispered in the ears from the trusted.
Unfold in this moment of ever lasting wishes.
My eyes close down and the feeling erases.
After waking up, Only the memory remains.

June 5th 2008.

...lol
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Hikari · Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 9:27 pm Post subject:

Well I think it's a really beautiful poem,
That's all I can say about it
I love it ^^

Savara · Posted: Fri Jun 13, 2008 7:29 pm Post subject:

It's beautiful.

(Though I'm not sure 'the feeling erases' is .. what you mean. You could certainly say it like that in poetry, but it feels to... active. As if the feelings themselves are erasing something (and it's not said what)... While I think you mean the feelings 'disappear' (but that doesn't sound nearly as interesting!).) It's great as it is ^_^ Nice visuals as well. (As far as you can speak of visual with a topic so... not visual.)

Reyna · Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:45 pm Post subject:

I have another one, a very weird one though, It simply fails at what I wanted to put down, but it succeeds at the same time.

PS: I do realise it's using anything but correct english, thank you XD

Night

While the sun brings light to the awakened
The dark fills up the sleeping.
Companioned by the clouds the stars shine brightly.
Trying to hide the nights beauty.
A world so quiet and peacefully, taking a rest of sun almighty.
Do not fear, do not sorrow.
This night will leave tomorrow.

Saturday/Sunday night June 22th 2008

I wonder why I get inspiration out of nothing to write weird things like this ...X_X?
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Hikari · Posted: Sun Jun 22, 2008 6:50 pm Post subject:

Who cares if spelling is off, It's poetry.. Poetry doesn't have to make sense
and with that I mean you can write and use the words the way you want to.
I personally think it's really a wonderful and beautiful Poem
Keep this up ^^ Love it

Reyna · Posted: Tue Aug 12, 2008 7:02 pm Post subject:

I guess I haven't posted anything for a -long- time so I decided to post some of my new stuff now XD

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Impossible Dream

Chasing Impossible dreams.
This victim has no reality.
As others believe.
Victim of Sorrow.
Victim of hate.
Do you still remember how this dream found creation?
As this dream fades, Tears will flow, a heart will bust out.
You were the one who created this fault.

2008 June 27th

(With the notes from June 26th)
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Sunrise

As the sorrow ends with sunrise.
A tear of happiness finds it's way.
Feel free to love to care.
As your smiles erase the pain.
Prayers mumbled so softly.
Were answered without the ruin.
Do you still believe it's wrong to trust?
The feeling you shan't share.

2008 June 27th
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The Room without Answers

Trapped inside an room without any answers.
Holding tight to unseen wonders.
Are you laughing or crying for me?
Will my only wish for you and I be denied.
As the sun went down and the moon rised.

2008 July 18th
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Okay I'm done XD *runs off again*
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Reyna · Posted: Sun Aug 24, 2008 5:40 pm Post subject:

2 more for now, and yea I was too lazy to edit my earlier post XD;

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Evening Sky

Outside in the evening sky
You'll encounter clouds filled with dreams
Unreachable these are, To the people who abandoned their wishes.
These angels of the sky will show you the path
Where dreams and reality join and merge
You shall reach this path, if you remember
That a dream is merely a wish without a sender.

2008 August 18th
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(Sounds familiar huh? XD check my sig and you'll know why)

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Rain

As quietly as the rain falls down
The sound gets muted and sticks to the ground
Late summer leaves find their way
As they beautifully float through the air's gate
Surrounded by the wind the sound moves up
To revive the memories you ever sought.

2008 August 20th
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Reyna · Posted: Sun Aug 31, 2008 12:31 pm Post subject:

Here's a plain stupid one that I just wrote for the fun XD:

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Autumn

High up in the sky,
The sealed Autumn cries,
Cries filled with hunger,
For the power to color.
Shyly she fills the air
With scents and colors, not knowing Summer will soon take his leave.
Autumn complains and gives excitement shivers

2008 August 27th
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and here's my latest one:

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Midnight Air

The smell of the midnight air,
Leaves traces of a way so clear.
Is this the way to dream land and are you lost?
Dear world, please do not give up.
Sleeping softly in the dark.
Dreams will flow as you sleep apart

2008 August 29th
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Hikari · Posted: Fri Sep 05, 2008 8:26 pm Post subject:

They all are really beautiful ^^
But you already know that I love them XD *hug*

Reyna · Posted: Sat Sep 06, 2008 4:22 pm Post subject:

Reyna · Posted: Mon Sep 08, 2008 4:39 pm Post subject:

And more weird poems!!

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Dreaming

Slowly Dreaming of the night
While you work at daylight.
Even though it tires you,
The thought of sleep will get you through.
Don't give up, Don't give in
Your rest will come when the night is near.
Tomorrow will start, Tomorrow will end.
As long you accept the night's send.

2008 September 8th
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Reyna · Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:19 pm Post subject:

(Copied from my MSN space /swt)

Life of Dreams

So Simple and Hard,
this life seems to be apart.
Humbly I ask, why and how?
has this world created this vow.
Two paths and only one meaning,
what path should I devoid and bet farewell,
while the other shall belong to the future's come.
Will I remember my choice after depart
From this road split in parts?
I only can whisper I won't decide,
As I live on in my way of life,
My Life of Dreams.

2008 October 30th

A poem that fits my space's name and my own way of living life, it explains that roads exists, but that no one is ever forced to take them. Keep your own road and walk right between the roads that are laid by others for you.
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Hikari · Posted: Thu Oct 30, 2008 9:24 pm Post subject:

I find it beautiful,
Nobody should be forced to take a road in life they don't want to walk upon.
Follow the road you want, A road where friends are to embrace you
And will always be by your side.
There are people, even those who you used to call friends, who will disappear from your life
But the true friends will always remain at your side, no matter what.
Love this work Ly-chan! ^^ *walks the path to Ly her house*
If only I could XD but the path to school forces me to go that way tomorrow! T_T *emo*